Review Number 5

Title: IIlegal Love
Author/s: Sea & Summer
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/CERulzRockz/
Reviewer: Georcelle
Site: www.timeless-memories.co.nr

Tilte: 8/10
~Well, your title suits the story. Your story was kind of forbidden at first but in the end, it reveals the truth.

Poster/Background: 7/10
~I like the poster/bg, just right. It made your readers comfortable to read your story. I'll give you 7 because, I just wondered why you have to put 2 pictures in it. Well, it suits the characters because their photos in the poster was hot.^^

Forewords: 8/10
~ I like the intro, so simple but meaningful.

Plot: 14/15
~I just like the plot.

Creativity/Originallity: 15/15
~ I'll give you 15 because, so far, I haven't read some stories same as your plot..so yah.^^

Writing Style: 10/10
~ Perfect writing style.

Flow: 10/10
~The flow of the story is just right. Enough to understand your readers.

Overall Enjoyment: 15/15
~ I enjoy it!^^

Bonus: 5/5
~ I'll give you bonus because, as I can see, you really had a hard time doing the story, esp. the rated scene. So yeah, update soon!^^

TOTAL :92/100