We’ll Take It Slow This Time by guilun_united
http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/guilun_united/
Reviewed By Tina
Title: 5/5
I love your title and I think it’s something new!
Forewords: 10/10
I love your forewords. It was really good. It really touched my heart!
Plot: 20/20
The plot is GOOD! This story is so me.. I mean, not exactly, but yea! Haha!
Originality: 10/10
Your originality is great. Making your own story like this is great!
Style of Your Writing: 13/15
I kind of had a hard time reading it in the beginning, because you didn’t skip the lines. But I understood it after that!
Spelling, Grammar, and Punctuation: 14/15
I found a couple of mistakes, but it’s cool though. I still like your story.
Descriptions and Word Choice: 10/10
I had a heart break when you said Aaron left GuiGui. I cried and wanted to beat up Aaron. Your story is so touching.
Appearance (Poster and Background): 9/10
Your poster is great, I love it, and it’s good.
Creativity and Bonus: 5/5
Your creativity is good! I give you 5 bonus points for it.
Total: 86/100
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